Revelation.

After some thought on the day of the rough-cut feedback, i have decided to completely revise my project in order to make the work more understandable and more interesting:

Instead of using the shots I have taken in order to portray a linear story I have chosen to mix the story into the title-sequence so as to make both sides seem more active.
This way, characters and concepts (such as murder and detection) can be gotten out of the way early so that there is little need for explaination when the movie begins.
This course of action was also advised by our teacher, so I believe that it is a good step to take.

It is a shame that we have been forced to wander so far from the animatic we had so previously heralded as infallable, but it seems as though time and mark is on the line, so appropriate measures must be taken.

Daniel Swanton--